i am definitely very pleased with the song that our numerous ideas have contributed to
a couple of thoughts for polishing...
-vocals of bec, adrian and myself for the 'if love...' phrase (it does not have to be in every place that the phrase is sung...)
-perhaps the inclusion of some of my guitar parts in the instrumental/last chorus
-before the second chorus, there is a rather empty section... i reckon that there is space for a simple melody played on a glockenspiel perhaps... or even of our voices singing the basic melodic ideas of the chorus.
-and the recording of the typewrite-ing of course!
thoughts?
(i finished an essay today)
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